August 22, 2009

But you

like the mountain that dwarfs
everything else but the sky


like the sunflower that seeks
nothing but the suns sight



like the lonely pilgrim belief
everything is a lie but the faith


like the peacocks hide
of colours, tucked but to sorrow clouds


like the river flow
stops at nothing but the blue sea


like the heart meant for love,only not yet
bleeds for no one but you

4 comments:

  1. Ur goin awesome buddy.....

    loved this one....

    it's more the genre i like.....

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  2. wonderful!!!
    is there a touch of melancholy???

    liked this the most...like the lonely pilgrim belief
    everything is a lie but the faith

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  3. nice it is i must say. Prolly with ur state of mind the poems change :)

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  4. n.k.g (velvet overcoatman)23 August, 2009 21:14

    Mayur, I think you're playing fair but what's unfair is how I find myself helplessly coming around here, looking for more. Some kid in the streets below is shouting "cheater, cheater", and maybe he knows it too.
    I do hope it isn't the relative distances which mystify these expressions but that they would manifest nature just as they do within this piece.
    Thanks.

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